poem

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by kyle1217 (Generic Zoner) on Sunday, 05-Feb-2006 6:38:32

You made me hate you,
I used to love you,
When I first met you I liked you,
Then I loved you cared for you,
I would have done anything for you,
But you made me hate you,
Now your bleeding,
You pushed me to far,
I couldn’t take it anymore,
Now your blood drips from the tip of the knife,
There’s a puddle on the floor,
The tears fall from my eyes,
I loved you and now your dead,
Because you bleed from the wound,
The wound you made me stab,
With the knife I’ll hate forever.

Post 2 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Sunday, 05-Feb-2006 6:53:27

hey that's actually really good. gory but good

Post 3 by kyle1217 (Generic Zoner) on Sunday, 05-Feb-2006 7:34:52

Exclude
You exclude and ignore me,
I'm like the fly on the wall,
Always watching you always there,
I feel that when I try to help u try to reach you you just push me away,
I’m always there for you yet you say nobody cares,
So if nobody cares why does this bother me so,
Why do I feel like I’m loosing you when all I want is to help,
Time will tell,
Because if it doesn’t,
Time will end.

Post 4 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Monday, 06-Feb-2006 3:56:01

I see. *psycho analyzes the poem*

I have a few ideas of what it's about, it's not that hard to figure out actually, but the specific meaning is ambiguous

Post 5 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Monday, 06-Feb-2006 3:56:36

I see. *psycho analyzes the poem*

I have a few ideas of what it's about, it's not that hard to figure out actually, but the specific meaning is ambiguous

Post 6 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Tuesday, 07-Feb-2006 9:08:38

I love the honest vitriol and desperation it gives the poem tremendous tangible life.More!

Post 7 by kyle1217 (Generic Zoner) on Wednesday, 08-Feb-2006 12:38:03

thanks for the comments

Post 8 by lights_rage (I just keep on posting!) on Monday, 06-Mar-2006 19:27:23

hmmm

Post 9 by Fruity Biscuit (fluffy things are grate come join me on my cloud. ) on Tuesday, 07-Mar-2006 9:51:04

nice one kyle. i like it. hugs.

Post 10 by Pure love (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Tuesday, 07-Mar-2006 9:58:40

Oh wow I really like that!! It's dark, I like dark things, lol